The element that of dystopia she reminds me of is totalitarian government because in a way she was making sure that wasn't going to happen by being a girl in the government with all men.
I feel that you could have put more into your Glog and explained more about your person, But in positive I really liked how you set up what you did have.
i think that you did a pretty good job you left out a-lot of things though like no paragraphs,no song,and you left alot of blank space wich drew away from your project. your blog post is ok i thought that it could have described the element of dystopia more but other than that it was good. AK
you did well explaining this part but left a lot of blank space on you glog could use your two paragraphs
ReplyDeleteI feel that you could have put more into your Glog and explained more about your person, But in positive I really liked how you set up what you did have.
ReplyDeleteYou did very well on makeing your glog very attractive, but you were missing your two paragraphs. Good job overall
ReplyDeleteI LIKED THAT YOU HAD ALOT OF INFO ABOUT HER U LOOKED LIKE YOU KNEW ALOT ABOUT HER.
ReplyDeletei think that you did a pretty good job you left out a-lot of things though like no paragraphs,no song,and you left alot of blank space wich drew away from your project. your blog post is ok i thought that it could have described the element of dystopia more but other than that it was good. AK
ReplyDeletei think that you did a good job, and if you had the rest of the information, it would of been even better. nice job
ReplyDeleteI rely injoyed this glog/blog. I thought it was very nice and organized and well planned out. Very nice job I injoyed reading this one. God job Dan.
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