you did well explaining this part but left a lot of blank space on you glog could use your two paragraphs
I feel that you could have put more into your Glog and explained more about your person, But in positive I really liked how you set up what you did have.
You did very well on makeing your glog very attractive, but you were missing your two paragraphs. Good job overall
I LIKED THAT YOU HAD ALOT OF INFO ABOUT HER U LOOKED LIKE YOU KNEW ALOT ABOUT HER.
i think that you did a pretty good job you left out a-lot of things though like no paragraphs,no song,and you left alot of blank space wich drew away from your project. your blog post is ok i thought that it could have described the element of dystopia more but other than that it was good. AK
i think that you did a good job, and if you had the rest of the information, it would of been even better. nice job
I rely injoyed this glog/blog. I thought it was very nice and organized and well planned out. Very nice job I injoyed reading this one. God job Dan.